In terms of both work and personal life aspects, risks are essential for each individual to take. I believe that the beneficial risks bring about will undoubtedly weigh more than the loss.
Firstly, risks will come with many disadvantages that we will need to consider. Most people will argue that taking risks put them in an uncertainty, which affect their confidence and overall productivity. In addition, risky opportunities may result in a waste of time and effort if your attempt do not work out. For above reasons, it is vital that we should only take calculated risks.
On the other hand, the perks we will receive after taking risks is undeniable. Nowadays, most entrepreneurial ideas requires high risks as well as most marriage proposals. That is two distinctive, yet relevant, examples for the risks which we are required to take in order to achieve a great outcome. The beneficial aspect of risk expresses most clearly in an old sayings: "high risk, high return".
Moreover, taking risks is also a chance for us to grow professionally and personally. A characteristic of risk is that it continually pushes us out of our own comfort zone. This is when we learn new things and encounter new experiences. No matter how the result may turn out, we will definitely acknowledge new lessons for ourselves.
In conclusion, risks may have negative consequences to our lives but its beneficial effects are also unarguable. Hence, it is necessary that individual take risks in not only their workplace but also in their personal situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'saying'?
Suggestion: saying
...f risk expresses most clearly in an old sayings: 'high risk, high return'. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.109375 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9983312416 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.0086784635 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.75 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364324526377 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117584824599 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833736198739 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204424664568 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540151010585 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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