IT IS INEVITABLE AS TECHNOLOGY ADVANCES, TRADITIONAL CULTURES WILL BE LOST. IT SEEMS THAT WE CANNOT HAVE THESE TWO THINGS TOGETHER.
TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.
Technology has flourished by leaps and bounds and reshaped the world in more than one way, providing us new avenues to be updated with the latest cultural news and events. A fair amount of people tend to believe that conventional way of culture will disappear in the near future. However, I do not completely accord on this point of view as the traditional culture has been the axis and backbone from the very beginning of civilization.
To embark on, there are multitude reasons why traditional culture is so popular for millions of people worldwide. First of all, it offers valuable profit for brain, widen horizon and provides sense of appreciation for cultural values. Everyone, no matter affluent or poor, is waiting desperately for some cultural event or art exhibition to attend relax and develop mental abilities. Some cultural values are irreplaceable and unique due to historical impact. Secondly, traditional culture sometime have a soothing effect, it gives saturation and seclude you from this hectic world like a therapy.
However, digital technology has prevailed throughout the world. It offers significant opportunities to follow cultural events without attending them. You can simply go online and watch a concert which is held thousand of miles away from you without physical presence. To illustrate, lately I watched by computer a new opened art exhibition. It was about the difference of lifestyles among reach and poor people. Though internet provided me with wings to the fantasy and I was incredibly amazed of the cutting-edge technology opportunities, however it didn’t get me the same feeling of inspiration and delight as it would do if I attended to the art gallery personally.
To conclude, the modern life has been drastically affected with advanced technology, but in my point of view it cannot pose threat to the existence of the traditional culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22697368421 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96290657238 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9777293422 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.933333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161179994078 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478315128661 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292931060289 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088629718867 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291990297388 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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