It may be true that a lot of ex-prisoners would step back on their criminal path after serving a sentence. There could be several reasons for this, and I believe that we can take various steps to tackle the issue.
It may be true that a lot of ex-prisoners would step back on their criminal path after serving a sentence. There could be several reasons for this, and I believe that we can take various steps to tackle the issue.
There are a number of reasons for which ex-offenders keep on committing crimes when they are released. Firstly, it is their nature that contributes greatly to the problem. They may have grown up without proper education, and therefore are unaware of their sinful actions and behavior even after a certain period of serving a sentence. Also, the punishments administered may not be strict enough to make them turn their life around and become law-abiding citizens. Another trigger for their backsliding can be the fact that these people are usually unable to make ends meet after being set free in that they are likely to fail to meet the requirements of most jobs. In addition, there might be a prejudice against these individuals since they have generally bad reputations. As a result, many of them choose to relapse into crimes.
In my view, several measures can be taken to solve the problems described above. To begin with, prevention is better than cure. Thus, education should be viewed as the top priority. People should be informed of the serious consequences that they may have to be faced with so that any latent idea of committing crimes will be dispelled in its infancy. Additionally, more harsh punishments need to be inflicted on offenders to deter them from re-performing illegal actions in the future. That is to say, imprisonment should be prolonged to increase its effectiveness. Last but not least, the general public needs to have proper attitudes towards reformed prisoners in order to facilitate their process of community reintegration.
In conclusion, the fact that numerous criminals will commit crimes after finishing their punishments in prison can be attributed to a number of factors, and both governments and their people have to join hands to deal with the problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 591, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... effectiveness. Last but not least, the general public needs to have proper attitudes towards ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03880597015 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80670679438 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2462892509 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2941176471 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470307416747 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143776058776 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188146091102 0.0667982634062 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.37917473164 0.151304729494 251% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.358832347738 0.056905535591 631% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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