There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper.
Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In recent years it is far more normal for people to work or study from home thanks to the widespread of the internet and technological developments. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
The growth of distance learning and teleworking can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to work or study from home can be more flexible in terms of time management. They do not have to spend long hours on roads in traffic congestion, and they can opt for studying or working at anytime which best suits them. From an economic perspective, this trend will result in a considerable reduction in the overheads covered by the organizations where these people work or study. They no longer have to pay for certain costs such as electricity and water bills. Additionally, there could be an notable decrease in the number of commuters, which will lead to a drop in petrol prices.
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather the convenience of not having to travel long distances every day, people working or studying at home may experience feelings of loneliness and isolation. They miss out on the interpersonal relationships formed through face-to-face interaction with colleagues or classmates. A student, for instance, may find it miserable having no precious memories with his friends during his school years. Secondly, from the financial point of view, the significant rise in the number of internet users is likely to cause internet providers to increase their charges in the interests of stable connection. Consequently, the general population will be faced with rising living costs.
In conclusion, the increase in the number of distance learners and teleworkers could have both beneficial and detrimental impacts on individuals and on the economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...face-to-face interaction with colleagues or classmates. A student, for instance, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24920127796 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96395753153 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6923334504 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.533333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197548732531 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634740941324 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869528134195 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127240975526 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105901115257 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.