it is more important to have a good family than to have friends . Family can always compensate for absence of friendships.
To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is often argued that friends cannot replace a well family,meanwhile parents are able to compensate.
I completely agree with opinion and,I think that family relationship is much more important than friends.
First of all,I believe that people cannot live far to family,his need it.Even if, someone has many friends, but feels sad and failing all the day.This person doesn't a good family to keep with him,while succeeding
in the society his objective.For example,street kids got a lot of friends,but have a bad life style and doesn't study.
That's why it's more important to have a well parents than friends.
Secondly,family can always compensate all friends,she gives her son their needs.It is clear,that there is strong relationship between everyone in the family.Parents are following these children for many problems then
achieve a better result in the school as well as in their life.For instance,many research said that a good family
relationship can help people to success in their life,despite all they have friends.Thus,advantages of parents can
always replace every people close to their son.
In conclusion,I strongly believe that the family is more important than friends, then have to keep of family relationship than to friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46428571429 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30487426048 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.747955644 49.4020404114 333% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284460196243 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161977718874 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807167129836 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122496075584 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761700588697 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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