It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment people who are already ill. Agree or disagree
It is generally believed that government expenditure should be allocated to promote a healthy lifestyle rather than to focus on treating patients. While I accept that a healthy lifestyle would prevent people from diseases, I would argue that public treatment still retains their important role in people's living.
On the one hand, it is justifiable to say that healthy lifestyle encouragement is more cost-effective than paying money to cure a particular disease. For instance, the cost of a balanced diet containing fundamental nutrients in the form of fresh ingredients such as meat, fish and vegetables as well as the cost of integrating these methods to education in the long term are within the government's financial capacity. Therefore, all kinds of people regardless of their ages, social status or whether they are patients or not, can also receive efficient support from the country for a sustainable lifestyle to prevent illness
On the other hand, there are many inevitable diseases which could not be prevented by a lifestyle or any other ways, but medical treatment. Covid 19 epidemic is the clearest evidence for the essentials of government funded treatment. Without these expenditures, many national citizens would experience a shortage of finance, especially the underprivileged, leading to widespread diseases and many serious consequences. Moreover, building an effective lifestyle which can prevent illness takes a lot of time and effort, while many illnesses related to occupational accidents or hereditary diseases still occur day by day. Such problems require financial support from the government to assure the health of the nation.
In conclusion, despite the remarkable impact of building a healthy lifestyle in society, I believe that there is still a great need for public treatment in today’s world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48591549296 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05458507528 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3095491734 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.8 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24729932352 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889472915539 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704264153923 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148215353853 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515200670341 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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