It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films, and the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that there is no need of visiting other places to learn about the local culture since via books, films and the Internet, we can gain a variety of knowledge regarding this topic. To my perspective, this idea is completely ill-founded.
On the one hand, there are many sources from which everyone can learn about the culture of a place without having to visit it. Firstly, people will have a better understanding of cultural traits of a region by reading books that include pictures and descriptions about that region’s culture, such as how they cook, what local ingredients they use, or how they greet each other. Documentaries are also of great help as most of them provide the audience with sound, allowing people to hear the way that local people speak. On top of that, culture can be learned through the Internet, where people can get access to a variety of video clips and articles published by other travellers, which gives people more diverse information from different perspectives.
On the other hand, I believe that it is better for learners to pay a visit to the country whose culture they want to know more about. Although abundant, the information provided by books and movies might soon be out of date because the world is always changing, and therefore, what was written or recorded a long time ago may no longer be accurate. For instance, new fashion trends and new words are invented every year, so people need to travel to learn what local people actually wear and speak in contemporary society. Additionally, people cannot get first-hand experience when at home reading reviews posted online, instead they should get direct exposure to the culture they are curious about so that they can have their own experiences and assessment without relying on others’ subjective viewpoints.
In conclusion, despite some ample source of information from books, movies and the Internet, people need to travel to learn more about the culture of places they wish to know about.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00892857143 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63377723536 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565476190476 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5988144476 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346663923733 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135074679238 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946701143768 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235626757975 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458479866827 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.