It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?
It is true that less and less student nowadays are choosing science-related courses for their further career prospect. In my opinion, there are a few reasons that led to this situation and it definitely generate adverse effects on society overall.
There are some causes which are the reason behind the scarcity in the number of students choosing to study science subjects. Firstly, it is widely known that those like Maths, Physics or Chemistry are considered to be heavy in tome of knowledge and high entry requirement in universities, not similar to those of others such as: foreign language course or Physical Training course. Secondly, it takes longer time to master everything and also being able to apply in real-life situation, sometimes trainees have to spend longer time in on-the-job training than normal students. Thirdly, not everyone can graduate and get flying scores for science major, even if student receive their certificates and get a desirable job with their achievement, these people tend to have no quality time with their kids and family.
Modern societies face a range of implicit threats with this issue. Since number of science qualified people decreases, there will be a higher in salary for those who already in the game and this is huge disadvantage for citizens who are not rich enough to pay for the services they received such as yearly medical examination for potential diseases. Also, this contribute to the lower in payment for those who engage in piecework job as more and more people are in this type of employment. For example, workers who work in a big factory producing identical objects or jobs in beauty industry.
In conclusion, science students are in short in many parts of the world and there are a few causes for this to happen. This will have negative effect on society in salary payment or causing further public anger from high public service fee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01892744479 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60301113874 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1498273213 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.583333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189265439237 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758348446328 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728553910999 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123524383563 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488666096519 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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