It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you think it is the reason for the growth in the rate of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
Many people believe that the rise in youth criminality is related to media violence such as combative movies, video games, TV shows, and so on and so forth. This alarming issue stems from a number of causes to which several solutions will be proposed in this essay.
There are a variety of reasons why media violence is to blame for the increase in juvenile delinquents. The most common root is the reality of life is distorted in the violent film. For example, if a person watches too many crime movies and too many violent scenes, then even if it's just a movie, it's a fantasy world, but gradually it will become a kind of reality that exists in the psyche of that viewer, especially adolescents. The other cause stems from brutalities portrayed in the media, which make youth tend to easily get angry, and rampant. According to a recent survey, children and adolescents may use violence as a way to solve a problem and become copy crimes like the one on the screen.
In order to address the aforementioned issues, several actions could be taken from the family, the school, and the authority. First, parents should focus their attention on taking care of, managing, and setting limits for their children. For instance, they can accept children to watch films but just on Youtube Kids or play educational video games. A second measure could be to strengthen propaganda about the law, behaviors, and morality. Once fully equipped with social knowledge and life skills, I believe that nothing can turn a child into a criminal, including the internet and media.
In conclusion, people think that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media resulting from two main reasons which are the absurdity and violent images. And in this essay, I suggest two steps that need to be taken to tackle this phenomenon, not only by the government but also by the individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... scenes, then even if its just a movie, its a fantasy world, but gradually it will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81846153846 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5744304822 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8852294846 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257909228131 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803895375767 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884436746994 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151706121282 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746501182718 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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