It is said that countries should produce all food for their population to eat and import as little as possible. Do you agree or disagree?
People hold the view that the countries should carry the responsibility of producing and providing food for their residents, reducing the dependency on other countries. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this statement for the potential negative effects that may be induced by it.
Providing all kinds of food for consumption for the whole population is simply impractical and deterrent to the country. First and foremost, some types of crops or animals are only raised in specific areas or countries. This will reduce food diversity, therefore the citizens would not be able to achieve a balanced and nutritious diet. In addition to this, adverse effects would arise on the economy when the agriculture sector becomes the focal point of governments for supplying sufficient food for the public, ignoring other economic sectors.
In contrast to the concerns mentioned above, I believe that importing food from other countries would offer a myriad of benefits. Bringing in food from abroad play an important role in increasing food variety, in which residents are left with more choices and are more nourished, achieving better efficiency in work. Moreover, governments can also focus on doing more different things rather than trying to supply enough food for the whole population. Besides that, the importing and exporting also help to strengthen the relationship between countries, which is also critical for a country to grow.
In conclusion, attempting to manufacture adequate food for the whole country is an inappropriate approach, which leaves behind negative effects on the economy. Whereas on the contradictory, food importation should be encouraged for the benefits that it offers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44528301887 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91396509849 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8188419797 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281812081905 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103634114606 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061740331706 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17258413642 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225555495015 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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