It is suggested that everyone wants to have a car and a fridge. Do the disadvantages of this development for society outweigh the advantages?
In today's era, people wish to have a car, a television and a fridge. I think that these facilities can bring about more problems for society in the long run compared to any advantage it might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of having a fridge, a car and a television. Firstly, the fridge and car make life better. A fridge can be stored any food items and do not spoil it. Similarly, nowadays the car became a necessity for everyone because it is more convenient for the ride and it saves time. Secondly, television has some applications, such as, to gain knowledge it can broder the horizon. Moreover, when people feel monotonous, television can rid of them through entertainment. Entertainment is the best way for being a refresh.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages above, I believe having facilities has disadvantages too. First and foremost is it can pollute the environment by car. As emission of carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide released which is not good for the environment. In the same way, the refrigerator has chlorofluorocarbon which leads to ozone depletion and global warming. A recent study showed that a large hid on the environment because of these gases only. Furthermore, television increases health problems. As people became a couch potato which directly affects the health. It is also a wastage of time and money by getting expensive television.
In recapitulation, facilities are necessary for a better life, for the source of knowledge and entertainment purpose. However, I believe that it hurts the environment and people's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Entertainment is the best way for being a refresh. Nevertheless, despite the advantage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, i think, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15503875969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14566346036 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.581708399 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.0 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5789473684 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21670788958 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573386577074 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562101508565 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122854022966 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486350994631 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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