Amount of money should be paid to preserve many ancient constructions and this is a controversial topic to discuss, because there are different opinions that some of them said this sum of money should be spent in modern buildings while others disagree with it. I think it depend on sort of building to look after or not and I agree about new system of buildings.
To begin with, every territory has special archaic constructions which belong to our ancestors with various information about past. In this case, I definitely agree to repair these sorts of buildings because these are treasure of our country and valuable for many cultures. For sample, in Iran many old palaces and areas were repaired because those places are worthwhile for people and it would be a good idea for tourist attraction. In fact, there are high number of old constructions that rebuilding them is such a wasting time and money in my opinion. Therefore, historical buildings are important enough to be conserved and government should consider them precisely even they be costly.
On the other hand, modern buildings are exceedingly popular among people. For illustration, many skyscrapers and towers are preferred to build or all the time people are fascinated by new shopping mall or accommodation . I believe that, it is people right to use modern system in their buildings as possible as they can. Besides, this is a huge change in urbanization of any country to have this type of novel system because this is a sign of development.
In conclusion, some valuable historical places should be repaired even it may pay too expensive not all kinds of old buildings and in my opinion, constructing modern buildings is a perfect idea to develop the countries.
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
- 3 These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work What could be the reasons for this Do you think it is a positive or a negatives development 47
- Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead Discuss both views and give your opinion 66
- Shopping online has increased recently What are the effects o this trend on the environment and what type of jobs does it create 78
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...ile others disagree with it. I think it depend on sort of building to look after or no...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed by new shopping mall or accommodation . I believe that, it is people right to u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, sort of, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97594501718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85514583856 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.287985915 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411954712756 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145102855567 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106498615214 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272879658666 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903117059147 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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