Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.
What problems does this shortage cause?
What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
Water is essential for the survival of every living being on this planet. The absence of fresh water is therefore a big issue and increasing as every day goes by.
There are various problem that are caused by the shortage of freshwater such as the lack of it present for agricultural use. Agricultural is a field in which water is a necessity in order for it to produce required results. Without water crops can't be grown and moreover, its impact on the farmers living in these rural areas, lack of water would mean the starvation of many people which would eventually lead to death. In urban cities, this shortage could lead to there being no water supply in our houses which is problematic as go about our daily lives as every household chore whether it be cooking or washing clothes, requires water.
It is evident that one of the main reasons for the shortage of water is the over-usage and wastage of it. In order to to solve this crisis, we need to stop being wasteful and start being responsible with our usage of water. For example, when we are brushing our teeth or applying soap on our hands we should turn off the tap so as to mitigate the wastage of water. Another way of dealing with this problem is to spread the message to people and impart into young kids the importance of water as a resource and the effects that the lack of it will have if not utilised with resposibility.
In conclusion, the solution to water scarcity can only be achieved with combined effort of every individual on this planet and therefore every person needs to be responsible and careful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...very day goes by. There are various problem that are caused by the shortage of fres...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e required results. Without water crops cant be grown and moreover, its impact on th...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
... over-usage and wastage of it. In order to to solve this crisis, we need to stop bein...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...on our hands we should turn off the tap so as to mitigate the wastage of water. Another ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59507042254 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47822044462 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2166037127 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250942952037 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100501298163 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451604048134 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149744330677 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420122418638 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.