Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that by reflecting upon the past serve no real benefits for people who live in present world. From my perspective, i completely disagree that we do not receive any meaning by looking back to the past.
Firstly, by learning the past people continuously inherit their knowledge which is relevant in their age to younger generations. This is particularly true to younger generations who did not experience it compared than their predecessor. For instances, there are a lot of stories and movies revolving around second world war. For youngsters that never feel it directly, they can only know how bad the damage caused from that war and how sad it was to live in that era by receiving stories from war veterans that survive that grim time and watching documentary film based on historical fact.
Another point is that, constant reflection to the past remind us to appreciate the historical event that had happened. It is necessary for people nowadays to looking back at the past and value the results of innovation and discovery found by many great peoples in that time. For example, the event of black death that almost wipe out one-third population of Europe in fifteenth century lead to discovery of how valuable it is to maintain a healthy and clean environment to prevent disease spread in a population. It is now clear from that event, the black death plague never happen again in the present world with full realization of better public health care system and better sanitation.
In conclusion, by constantly assessing the past we are able to deepen our understanding about our world and respect our ancestor effort to tackle every problem they encounter for the sake of better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ancestor effort to tackle every problem they encounter for the sake of better fu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, so, third, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95486111111 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70472516061 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9279666634 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.727272727 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189296745622 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674369154749 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511431385925 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115330017496 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638598314868 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.