Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as pratical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
As 21 century continues to unfold, the frontiers are becoming blurred in an accelerating pace and people travel more widely. Although some individuals would argue that learning and speaking host language processes can lead to some social issues, others claim that these types of obstacles have become vague because of wide array of reasons. To my mind, nowadays nations are less isolated, thanks to technological advances and the internet. What should travelers or immigrants do in order to decrease these side effects to the least possible amount?
On the one hand, some psychological studies have shown that being in a foreign country and learning to speak their language create various problems like misunderstanding. Moreover, when people are exposed to a new environment with totally different convention and tradition makes you feel loneliness and anxious as they would find themselves at crossroads whether to blend in with the local culture or to cherish their own cultural heritage. Consequently, it can lead to many psychological and mental disorders. Unfortunately, some societies are xenophobic and discriminate against foreigners and newcomers.
On the other side of the spectrum, many individuals especially new generations are able to get along with host country’s culture and language because they have access to boundless sources of information through social media and the internet to instill adopt countries values and languages before they emigrate there. Not only do not they experience culture shock and language barriers in the severe amount, but also they can merge into new society effortlessly. In addition, there are some countries which are key-destinations for new emigrants because they are multi-cultural and newcomers will be able to find their social status with out facing deprivations. A salient example is Canada as a most famous melting pot country.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, upgrading our knowledge in numerous ways such as reading and researching about new communities would remove barriers which may cause despair and other difficulties. If we broaden our horizon, we will find it easy to approach to this controversial issue and conquer it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, still, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46531791908 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04520196981 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.3662147552 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.071428571 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192687369582 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537201575993 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483847756629 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994447518393 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506074025379 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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