It is believed that serious social and practical problems can be caused when we are staying in a country where foreign language is prevalent. In my opinion, speaking a non-native language result in disparity with the regional peple while communicating and socializing with them. Although, it can also provide us with an opportunity to learn a new language and familiarize ourselves with it.
One evident benifit of speaking language apart from our mother tongue provide us with an opportunity to learn a new language and excel it. Moreover, having knowledge of a non-native language can help boost our job application and provides us with more career related opportunities. To illustrate, people staying in Quebec, where french is widely spoken will start learning this language because of which they will have a chance to apply for companies accepting only french speaking applicants.
On the other hand, getting familiar with a new language is not an easy task. Initially, when people start their journey in a new country they have to face a huge communication gap. For instance, when people landed there, they have to face a lot challenges with directions and what route they can take to reach their destination but when they ask any local citizen for help they were unable to understand them and felt helpless. Also, these people are always considered outsiders as a result of which they are not able to socialize with others and have to live an awkward life there.
To conclude, language is a great barrier that needs to be overcome to create a good relationship with people living in foreign countries. While living in a country where a less known language is spoken, can provide you with an opportunity to learn that language but initially creates a communication gap that requires a lot efforts to fill this gap. Moreover, not being comfortable with other people's language can make them consider you as an outsider because of which a sense of oneness can never be achieved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99698795181 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76406096598 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1844346661 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.615384615 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288363624457 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11760753191 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113437931551 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187817180143 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874182401557 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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