Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the number of individuals, who have went abroad for studying or working, has increased. Throughout these years, it is argued that enforcement of speaking foreign languages could result in both social difficulties and practical ones. Instead, I myself do not concur with that statement based on some reasons which will be clarified in this essay.
To commence with, there are some considerable aspects which have made some people including myself not to consider living in other countries to be a problem by speaking their language. The main one is that both citizens and authorities have adopted to various types of people who have come to their societies especially in developing ones. Although there were more possibilities that emigrants were not accepted in other countries in the past, in recent decades this issue has got more common. Therefore, it has been prevalent for humans to have not only friends, but also co-workers from other countries. For example, Chinese people have been welcomed in every society across the world without having any worries for making new friends or not have permission to get a job.
In addition, despite residents of other countries, people who have desired to go abroad have altered their behavior and thoughts about trying new experiences. Even though one of the difficult issue for humans has been the alterations in their lives, they have been trying to comprehend various cultures. As a result, their personalities have propelled them to accept disagreement and also to figure about how to cope with changes. Many students, for instance, have immigrated to other countries while being aware of all the problems they may encounter with in their up-coming years. Consequently, the whole world has changed to be more welcoming to unidentified occurrences.
In conclusion, in spite of all the issues which people may suffer from if they do not live in their own countries, it has got easier to communicate and get a job in them. So, they this issue has not caused troubles as serious as they were in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... welcoming to unidentified occurrences. In conclusion, in spite of all the issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09117647059 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73654462244 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555882352941 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3904955903 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15398490242 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531973741101 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418569478352 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963908224066 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241233516018 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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