Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It has been believed that inhabiting different state need to talk in an unfamiliar language has major difficulties both communal and functional. I strongly agree with this opinion and think that there are several drawbacks effect on people's working status and social condition.
First of all, without having a full grasp of a language can cause trouble while doing a task in work time. Because of differences of language sometimes verbal mistakes leads to major problems such as poor communication, paperwork mistakes and weak concordance in the team. For instance, a survey in Weekly Business magazine revealed %70 of foreign workers without having an adequate level of language has a hard time completing their daily duty.
Secondly, language discrepancy between natives and foreigner results in verbal and physical conflict. people who live abroad commonly have problems with locals due to lack of language knowledge. Having dispute over oral mistakes result in controversy. Moreover, in some cases, it leads to fighting and assault end to the law court. For example, Spring news media corporation showed in 2015 that because of poor communication in tourism areas increased verbal and physical gradually.
Last but not least, People often deceived from the shop keepers due to their lower capacity understanding flux of words. Because of the insufficient describing situation to police officers, non-natives became a victim of false advertising and tricks of the locals. For example, a survey created by correspondents in Dakota University revealed in 2019 that %85 of sellers often use language as an advantage to gain more profit on their product.
To sum up, in my opinion, to survive in foreign land people need decent language as well as cultural information.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55197132616 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25811774682 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6063422821 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.9 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151951971148 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518584419215 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573549506064 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826536872067 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394752987877 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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