Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that community jobs need to be done by specific detainers without paying them rather than keeping them in prison. I partly agree with this opinion and think that although free labour force is beneficial for the government, it has fatal consequences without sufficient supervision.
There is no doubt that to have a free workforce is a huge advantage for the authority. With these inmates, jobs related to communities could be achieved fast and profitable. these captives often serve as a construction worker or streetcleaner to enhance government services. For example, The Department of criminal Justice at the Commonwealth of Virginia reported in 2016 that %70 of labour done by people who have minor criminal records made government able to establish railway for a new station without paying external construction services.
it is becoming more and more evident that prisoners tend to perform violations toward a society in poor monitoring. Because of their long prison sentences or their violent nature, these jobs are a perfect opportunity to sustain their criminal acts. For instance, The Ministry of Education in the UK stated in 2017 that % 27 of the prisoner in the construction of new school building near to old one performed both verbal and physical abuse towards children. Therefore it is certainly understandable to keep these prisoners in jail to prevent more dangerous situations.
In conclusion, even though prisoners work has benefits in several fields, I think these criminal's backgrounds should carefully be examined before they violate the law again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36653386454 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95701494581 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6556462721 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147594781899 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527136518916 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471894433842 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957268595736 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400336184824 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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