Moving to a new country which has a different culture and language may be a huge challenge, in terms of coping with the new environment and rather may cause significant social problems along with practical ones.
First, speaking about social problems, which can be mainly framed in the language barrier that may occur, is in my opinion, the toughest issue to tackle. Whereas, being in a country that does not speak a familiar language might make the foreigner himself feel like an outcast, like he doesn’t belong. Because, as per example, if a person needs to go to the market to run some errands and wasn’t able to find a certain need of his, it might be difficult to ask for it, not knowing how to communicate his problem using his own words. Furthermore, the traditions of the new country may contradict with the ones a person is used to, which may also pose as a certain difficulty. As, the concept of what is wrong and right may differ leading to a possible misunderstanding with the locals.
On the other hand, practical problems can rise too. Take for example finding a job opportunity, this specifically can be challenging when moving to a new country, hence any employment will require full understanding of the firm’s policies and procedures. In addition to acknowledging assigned tasks, besides communicating results to management. Therefore, all the mentioned points may be inapplicable or difficult to apply by a foreigner who does not acquire a strong communication tool.
In conclusion, I agree that moving to a new country can be challenging and cause multiple social and practical problems on a daily basis. But perhaps, life is all about conquering these challenges to live the best out of any experience.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, speaking about, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98630136986 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03016980834 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599315068493 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5951117409 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224106575223 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837215597886 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793410065304 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144361429575 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397138615487 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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