It’s often considered that being migrants have carried some issues such as social and businesslike challenges because of language barrier. I completely agree with this opinion as some matters such as cultural differences and finding job, which will be explain in the following paragraphs.
I believe that language is the first and most prominent (The most salient) factor in communicating with others. Even if someone has enough knowledge about the destination language, he or she would have some difficulties to transfer his or her attitude completely. For instance, the evidence-based experience shows that about 80 percent of oversea students in the first semester of their study in a foreign country have faced drop scores and lose their social communication because of having problems in speaking and understanding. Additionally, some behaviors might be offenses in a country, which those aren’t disrespectful signs in another country. As an example, without parent’s permission are misbehavior in most of the middle-east countries, however, it’s common in most European and American countries. Therefore an individual who faces language barriers to communication might have problems for social interactions.
As a practical aspect, it can be referred to as finding a job. In fact, in most of job advertisements being fluent in the native language is one of its requirements. So a person who is in the first step of learning a foreign language, not only would tackle with communication problems but also lose her or his confidence. Imagine a migrant works in a restaurant and can’t interact with clients so its business might drop. Thus language in making money for life spending is very important.
To conclude, I absolutely concur that having to converse in a foreign language can cause social problems such as communication and accessing to work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42662116041 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20211100564 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580204778157 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3461688329 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221549198872 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778210599784 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810372178199 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156357127568 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854505285522 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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