Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

It is argued that people who live in foreign countries have possibility to result in harsh social and practical problems. I agree that non-native speakers could induce some problems in their daily life but do not think that they are serious problems.

People who have to speak in foreign languages sometimes undergo difficulties from various respects. The most common difficulty is communication needed for their life such as buying groceries in market or taking transportations. For example, when I was in France, I had difficulties reading the name of groceries in market, since it was written in French, which I have no knowledge about. Because of this, I had to ask about the product to workers. Likewise, many foreign people suffer from similar problems. Thus miscommunications can be a social and practical problem.

Even though it seems obvious that non-native speakers have some social and practical troubles, it does not mean that it is a vastly serious problem. As we have many helpful resources for solving those problems, we can overcome foreign people's problems. For instance, thanks to the development of technology, electric translator can be utilized to help communication between different language speakers. Also, national policies to support foreign people would be positive to alleviate the social and practical problems. Offering public documents in various languages could be one of those policies. For example, Korean public affair facilities provide public document not only in Korean but also in English.

To sum up, I admit that some social and practical problems are caused by people who speak a foreign language, however we can surmount them with up-to-date translators and policies supporting foreign languages of government.

Votes
Average: 9.1 (3 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44160583942 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93210188811 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7343696524 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375139088324 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125602800618 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103304979066 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241350920646 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438902263702 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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