Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
It is often said that, the world becomes small village and no difference between nations. However, moving to another country and speaking another language may imply to unexpected reactions. I strongly agree the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs to reach a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, traveling to another country for study or work and speaking another language may cause some noticeable problems. Moreover, misunderstanding between native speakers and foreigners who speak their language can lead to remarkable problems such as failure in university or losing money in businesses. For example, a study has been conducted in one of the developed country showed that the rate of foreigners who can speak the language of this country in fluently way is so low. In addition, most of foreigners face a huge difficulties in pronunciation. As a result, it is a better to study or work in a country which speak the same language of yours.
On the other hand, not only working or studying abroad may cause an important problems in communication, but also may lead to social problems such as isolation feeling. Furthermore, when someone lives in another country which speaks non understandable language for him , this can lead to psychological problems and imply to suicide. For instance, a research was conducted in Germany in 1995, this research illustrated that, the percentage of suicide cases between foreigners who face difficulties in learning German language is markedly high.
Taking everything into consideration. Although, the working or studying oversees might develop skills and learn new language, but for persons who can not have ability to learn another language is an inadvisable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32246376812 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05385290121 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1677481244 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253722852698 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862405620945 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660910808052 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137515850781 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853229128314 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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