Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
It is often said that, the world becomes small village and no difference between nations. However, moving to another country and speaking another language may imply to unexpected reactions. I strongly agree the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs to reach a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, traveling to another country for study or work and speaking foreign language might cause some noticeable problems. Moreover, misunderstanding between native speakers and foreigners who speak their language can lead to remarkable problems such as failure in university or losing money in businesses. For example, a study has been conducted in one of the developed country showed that the rate of foreigners who can speak the language of this country in fluently way is so low. In addition, most foreigners face difficulty in pronunciation. As result, it is a better to study or work in a country which speak the same language of yours.
On the other hand, not only working or studying abroad may cause tremendous problems in communication, but also can lead to social problems such as isolation feeling. Furthermore, when someone lives in another country which speaks non understandable language for him, this might lead to psychological problems and end up to suicide. For instance, a research was conducted in Germany in 1995, this research illustrated that, the percentage of suicide cases between foreigners who face massive difficulties in learning German language is markedly high.
To sum up. Although, the working or studying oversees might develop skills and learn new language, experts do not advice people who can not have ability to learn another language to travel abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27372262774 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9414088612 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1776556478 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266221783081 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905939222361 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732580823944 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141358340022 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912161796862 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.