Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the contemporary world, there has been an increasing number of people living in a foreign country and consequently speaking a second language, leading to the opinion has been divided on whether or not this trend results to some serious problems in society as well as daily basis. In my perspective, I completely agree that inhabiting in another country instead of motherland may bring about several drawbacks.
First of all, in terms of society, citizens living in a foreign country may confront many issues. The conflicts of the traditional culture between native people and newcomers may occur, causing the uncomfortable feeling and an intensive atmosphere. As a result, people living in the host country may have a tendency to adapt to and change themselves to be suitable for the lifestyle there, hence their own custom from motherland may be faded and disappeared. Another noticeable fact is that immigration is likely to be a burden for the host country’s government in the welfare system, especially for unemployed people, the young, accompanied by the elderly one. In consequence, this issue has a negative influence on the national administration to take control of the crime rate such as robbery or drug abuse.
Regarding a number of practical misunderstanding, the distinct manner is what I put my priority in. For example, there has been a difference in the table manner between the Asian families and the European, forcing the Asian newcomers to learn a new way to use spoon and knife instead of chopsticks as usual when they live in the United Kingdom. Furthermore, the language barrier causes a reduction in working’s productivity. In terms of corporate life, by having insufficient comprehension from employer’s requirement, the staff may spend many hours finding out problems by themselves and are unlikely to reach their desired outcomes at work. Similarly, one illustration is with students studying abroad in the US without master English, they fail to acquire in-depth knowledge from lectures.
In conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, I am convinced that dwelling in a foreign country results in several serious problems in the social and practical field. Therefore, it is essential to study the second language fluently before making the decision of living outside motherland, hence preventing people from any misunderstanding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, second, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37967914439 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19181461195 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582887700535 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3214172479 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.714285714 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16442660268 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541115194552 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377735988995 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103250206886 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289252454784 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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