In modern world people living in foreign countries is becoming increasingly popular and having to speak foreign language is seen as a problem for them. I totally agree that people moving in foreign country and having to speak foreign country can cause serious problem in dealing with the people is that country and finding employment
Language barrier is the main problem faced by people.so people won’t be able to socialize in a society. Due to language barrier people often find it difficult to understand the culture and tradition of the country that the are living in. They will often find themselves ignored and discriminated not being able to communicate with local people which may lead to depression. They might also offend the people of host country by being ignorant of their culture and traditions.
In addition those people who study in a foreign country will often find it difficult to perform well in their studies since they will face problem in understanding the language.student will be often ignored by their class mates and will become antisocial.
Other problem faced by people is difficulty is finding job. Most of the company will hire those employee who can speak fluently. So those people who cannot speak language of that particular country they moved to will find tough time getting employment. Even if they find job they won’t be able to perform well compared to those who can speak that particular language. So it may affect their promotion and increment.
In conclusion I agree that language barrier can cause serious problem for people in finding job and being able to socialize with people in a community. So i believe that in order to live in foreign country learning the language of that country is the best way to avoid all the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lture and tradition of the country that the are living in. They will often find themsel...
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Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...nt of their culture and traditions. In addition those people who study in a foreign cou...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will often be
...m in understanding the language.student will be often ignored by their class mates and will b...
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Line 6, column 91, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this employee' or 'those employees'?
Suggestion: this employee; those employees
...ding job. Most of the company will hire those employee who can speak fluently. So those people...
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Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eak fluently. So those people who cannot speak language of that particular countr...
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Line 8, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ocialize with people in a community. So i believe that in order to live in foreig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62426534565 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42474916388 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6398398061 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204517922096 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886019269168 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075514901099 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147903933236 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103060895018 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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