Learning foreign language have become necessary nowadays since, more people travel and work abroad. While some people are of the opinion that they learn foreign language only to travel and work abroad others believe that learning language just for the purpose of traveling and working is not the only reason. In my opinion I believe that learning foreign language can benefit people in understanding foreign culture and tradition and can improve the friendship between people of different countries.
On the one hand people think just to travel and work abroad they need to learn foreign language. While traveling abroad people who knows the language of particular country won’t face any problem in communicating with the local people. They can ask any help they need whereas if someone who doesn’t know anything goes for vacation to foreign country they will face problem in even asking for a water to drink. Those people working abroad will also have no problem in dealing with customers if they know many language. For instance if someone working in Thailand doesn’t know the Thai language they will face difficulties in understanding what customers need and won’t be able to give the services the customer needs.
On the other hand some people are of the opinion learning foreign language for the reason of traveling and working is not only the reason and I agree. People can learn language to know the culture and tradition of other countries and to have better friendship . Getting to know the culture and tradition of other countries is very interesting since every country have unique culture and tradition. It will broaden the knowledge and will have wider understanding of world around us. For example many people visit Bhutan to learn about the culture and tradition which is unique to them.
Furthermore when someone know the language of particular country they can communicate like a native speaker and can converse about any thing so, they will feel closer to them and make god friendship.
To conclude people learn language not only to make traveling and working abroad easier but it will benefit the people in getting to know someone’s culture and tradition and have good friendship .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'water'.
Suggestion: water
...ey will face problem in even asking for a water to drink. Those people working abroad w...
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Line 2, column 512, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: 'many languages'.
Suggestion: many languages
... in dealing with customers if they know many language. For instance if someone working in Tha...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of traveling and working is not only the reason and I agree. People can learn lan...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... countries and to have better friendship . Getting to know the culture and traditi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...and tradition which is unique to them. Furthermore when someone know the language of parti...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...ique to them. Furthermore when someone know the language of particular country they...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...a native speaker and can converse about any thing so, they will feel closer to them and m...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e and tradition and have good friendship .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13774104683 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5840366216 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402203856749 0.561755894193 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6798985376 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31966556477 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153866333287 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14492931815 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20408290234 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128100152064 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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