A lot of people who wanted to become professional athletes gave up this idea because of the fear of failure and parents' pressure. Do you think that parents should support their children who want to do a career in sports?
Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
The word of the professional sports have always been filled with permanent confrontation and environment of the pressure on athletes. Some people claim that young sportsmen quit the idea of the career in the field due to the awe of loosing and the high bar of self realization from parents.This essay will discuss whether the parental encouragement is vital and beneficial for a young sportsman
To start with, professional sport is closely linked with the pressure of the constant rivalry that is maintained by the coaches. Such a phenomenon may lead to the insecurities over the potential and as a consequence to some mental issues preventing a person from achieving highs goals. Moreover, a plethora of parents who consider their children as the outstanding athletes morally disorientate the young sportsmen with unattainably standards. For example, my friend practiced professional speed skating from a very early age , however the parental high hopes were an emotional burden for him causing appealing to a psychologist and leaving the sport. Thus, the family environment and the constant pressure from the coaches may lead to developing the fear of loosing and quitting the sports.
Nevertheless, I reckon that the support from the inner family circle is sure to inspire the potential professional sportsman. The positive atmosphere is likely to fulfill a youngster with determines to practice more rather than quitting on sport. The faith of parents and the trainer in the winning capacity of an athlete are extremely beneficial for shaping such traits as confidence and perseverance. For instance, according to Alina Zagitova, her mother’s support helped her overcome all obstacles and difficulties on the road to the Olympic medals. Thereby, the impact of the constant encouragement from the close people is hard to overestimate for a young sportsman.
To sum up, some children are absorbed by the fear of defeating in competitions that may even provoke the terminate of their sports careers. In such tough periods parents and coaches should make a young athlete feel surrounded by love and support .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, for instance, i reckon, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29464285714 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01553608205 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4846283968 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.846153846 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220544910762 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761117290302 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498179193748 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139659536747 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343513568129 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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