In today's astonishingly industrial and agricultural activites, the issue as to whether most of wild animals are on the verge of extinction due to human's poaching illegall on both land and sea has remained source of controversy on all face of newspapers.I write up a few causes and several steps could be followed to tackle this situation.
In the term of land, the increasing of wild species's exploitation can be the attributable to many reasons. Illegal hunting for food or for many parts of animal's body to make various need for decoration or illegal trade. Moreover, Giving rise to the investment of industrial and agricultural activities make wild animals loss of habitat, the remaining group are held in captivity to make jokes in the circus or become elegant pleasures for successful businesses.. Those industrial activities are pollution wild animal's natural environment and destroying wild animal's shelters. In the term of sea, overfishing for food consumption or ocean species are in the red list caught to serve wealth loyalty, or also oil exploitation can be pollution aquatic system or transportation, which is demand for the trade exchange about export and import among countries, can cause water pollution seriously
To tackle this problem, the government go first that spread the awareness of the balance of ecosystem and the diversity of biodiversity, residents must hold fast to the belief that wild animals have been associated with natural environment also a vital role in human being's daily life.Because of the concerns of poachers, the government should impose more stringent environmental laws in poaching, even give a life imprisonment for people that against legal deterrents. Furthermore, Builing wildlife sanctuaries and stop industrial and cultural activities that promote wild animal's natural habitat the best choice to reproduce.In accordance with these solutions, people should priortise the products made from parts of animal's body to boycott the most clearly.
In conclusion, Wild animals play an significant role in daily life. And the contribution and the conservation of human beings will create a best conditon for them to avoid on the verge of extinction. And there has an undeniable fact that most of endangered species are the attributable to the handle of humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...l and agricultural activites, the issue as to whether most of wild animals are on the verge o...
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...f controversy on all face of newspapers.I write up a few causes and several steps...
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...gant pleasures for successful businesses.. Those industrial activities are polluti...
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...al habitat the best choice to reproduce.In accordance with these solutions, people...
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...mals body to boycott the most clearly. In conclusion, Wild animals play an sign...
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... attributable to the handle of humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34340659341 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04607153648 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.58113305 49.4020404114 414% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.5 106.682146367 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 20.7667163134 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203170052409 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785678063799 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460881869283 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120980831218 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520398600029 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.0946893788 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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