the issue as to whether it is beneficial for the society to ban on all form of advertisements or leaftlets on street and forms of platform because of itsdetriment impacts has remained source of controversy. Personally, I consider that it is both pros and cons in this notion.
It is true that the purpose of advertising to inform people of the types of products that suit their daily needs. Therefore, people are aware of different choices when they shop. A surge of advertisenment through online platforms makes customer's attraction. Advertisements contains the information about the features, the sales and the product's utilization so that buyers can contemplate and compare the most reasonable purchases, Besides, the greater demand for advertising in nowaday's highly competitive market can be the main contributor to enhance the company' images as well as prestigious values. However, advertising only manipulates people into buying certain items because each people have own priorities and calculations, and customers only buy the most suitable items for their situation.
However, Many forms of advertising nowadays are becoming more and more misguided and manipulative.In term of business,Large companies usually spend a huge amount of money creating civil services that encourage clients using a particular product or wearing a outfit to look modern and fashionable. For example, Apple can enhance some functions and purposes to attract people to use all those products through advertising. As a result, this can lead to the imbalance of world technology as well as economic downturns. Furthermore, in term of recreation, some methods to market on Youtube or game websites that fired a lot of sexually explicit advertisements in regardless of age or gender. This can result in the harmful progress for youngsters and each government should propose some stringent regulations and ban all this forms of advertising.
In conclusion, advertising also play an vital role in all aspects of lifes. This creates a huge amount of opportunities to shop and suit for own styles and characteristics. And I believe that advertising is manipulating people into the faith and to be naiive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37026239067 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20818689829 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562682215743 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0426447377 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205475255589 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659550350273 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494169907263 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130644819986 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392242006147 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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