In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
There are waves of resident immigration from rural to urban areas, particularly modern cities, in several nations, causing a reduced population in the countryside. From my perspective, this trend would be virtually negative, and I would argue for my notion in the following essay.
Firstly, regarding rural areas where this development has decreased their number of residents, it can lead to a massive lack of labour. A vast number of rural youngsters decide to leave their hometown to settle in a faraway city permanently for a better job prospect. This declined proportion of the youth can mean an increasing percentage of those in their middle and old ages in the population of the countryside, where there majorly is intensive manual labour work, such as agriculture and handicrafts. As a result, it cannot meet the essentially required amount of labour force for those jobs since letting the elderly work hard is risky. Also, as an unwanted consequence of the lack of labour, the economic gap between the countryside and cities might be extended wider.
Secondly, in urban areas, especially cities, the immigration of rural citizens can pose several severe socioeconomic issues. Initially cited as a problematic influence of this trend is the heavier pressure on urban systems of public service. In other words, the more citizens move from rural to urban regions, the more potentially overloaded medical and educational systems or accommodations can be. In addition, more population in a city can mean fewer opportunities for the citizens, particularly the young. Therefore, the problem of the high unemployment rate in big cities might be getting more complicated. Furthermore, in some cities, many people who have just migrated to the city do not know much about modern life, so sly organizations easily deceive them. In this respect, migration from rural areas can increase city crime rates.
In conclusion, the migration trend from rural to urban regions can give rise to many detrimental effects and, therefore, should be considered disadvantageous, in my opinion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29696969697 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02732581019 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3260543167 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.533333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189199924562 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620614898274 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383870526451 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982161834064 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044930392083 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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