In this present scenario, numerous health issues are rising their heads and obesity is one of them effecting most of the young ones. However, some sections of population believe that government should be accountable towards this problem. Notwithstanding, I somewhat agree with this assertion.
To commence with, children are future of nation and their development means progress of country. Thus, it is primary duty of government to make their upcoming citizens healthy, for which they can implement strict rules to keep check on adulterated food. Authorities can impose taxes and higher the standard of food, which consequently will force companies to improve their product and fullfill all requirements set by officials. Moreover, government can upgrade the infrastructure like sports Stadium, parks and gymnasiums. Also, they can make children and their parents aware about hazardous repercussion of being overweight, through media and other programs. Hence, government plays an imperative role in improving youngsters health.
Nevertheless, all these measures cannot be successfully enforced without cooperation of gaurdians as lawmakers can only build parks but it is upto parents to encourage juveniles to increase their physical activity. Furthermore, nowadays both parents are working and kids have free will to eat anything from anywhere without checking hygiene. Therefore, some restrictions on their eating habits can be great step. Even, parents should prepare some meals so that children can eat healthy and home made food. Deducing, this is responsibity of procreaters to raise their child properly, and keep check on their habits.
In conclusion, this complication can be solved with assistance of government and efforts of parents. As, both have equal responsibility towards future of nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e of government and efforts of parents. As, both have equal responsibility towards...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70848708487 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9712290774 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7101231717 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102130091893 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384274950735 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318600787613 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065023447082 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00915421049516 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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