In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as valuable work experience.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is commented that children should enjoy their life to performing lots of task like playing, learning instead of doing labour work. A section of society perceive that children should do some type of labour work which increase their work experience. I completely disassociate myself from this point of view. I believe that children do not need to take work experience since their childhood. Ideas enunciated further in my discourse will support my point of view.
Discussing few points to prove my disagreement, the foremost one is that take education in childhood is an imperative for children. Education plays an indispensable role in life of human being. Basic knowledge and ability should be acquire by children before join any work industry because advance work is not possible on field without it. For instance, if any children start mechanical work in any organisation he/she can not perform an excellent task as compare to knowledgeable mechanical engineer. Thus, to become an expert in any field children should focus on study instead of work.
Additionally, I also perceive that children have less ability to understand any paid work in work field. I think this time is so early for children. Children should enjoy their life in activity like playing, listening song, reading books rather than focus on work. As well as, they have to learn good virtues, manners, discipline from their parents and adult persons.
However, a diminutive section of society tend to perceive that to do any work education do not play main role. Children can learn much more in their life from work experience rather than any books.
To conclude, it is said that children should do work from early stage of life. I tend to believe that children should become more rounded first in knowledge perspective. After that they can start their carrier which leads to success with extremely high speed in children’s life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of tasks'.
Suggestion: lots of tasks
...n should enjoy their life to performing lots of task like playing, learning instead of doing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'acquired'?
Suggestion: acquired
.... Basic knowledge and ability should be acquire by children before join any work indust...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12420382166 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69928648184 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1858509167 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6842105263 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25033196451 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091911467144 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744953444749 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158115506577 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490361346651 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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