Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
Globalization has resulted in more business and culture connection among different nations. There have been divided opinions on the topic that more establishment of more manufacturing units and increasing traditional relation with different countries bring more benefits for both country. Some are readily comply this views; while, others argue that it is risk of vanishing states’ identities. Ahead of my stand, both views should be analysed.
Explaining the former opinions, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that globalization have ample merits. It leads to low rate of unemployment from the developing countries. Young blood can get chance to open their start up in foreign country. Authorities of multi-nation production units can hire highly educated candidate from another landmark as well as. Additionally, it is directly effected on international trade market. Growing nations can get improvement on their economical results. Moreover, people have more opportunities to travel all around the world and get awareness of other cultures and traditions. Genuine Cultural contact is useful in any critical condition our state. For example, if citizens of a country are in trouble because of earthquake, they can get help from another country whose have good relation.
On the flip side, other argue that national identities are being lost because of globalization. They tend to believe that youngsters copy the eating method of foreigner, watch the same television channel, ware same cloths. What to next, people have also started to do conversation in English language. It means, importance of local language is disappearing. They also tell that young people are forgetting their traditions and rituals.
To conclude with my opinion, I fell that this is a very narrow definition of national identities and nations are as different as they were ever in past. Cultural identity is far away from what we are watching or wearing or eating. Although, citizens copy western culture , they do all the activity related their culture. Finally, there are more advantages of genuine relation for business and culture than demerits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: complied
...fits for both country. Some are readily comply this views; while, others argue that it...
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Suggestion: in the past
...ions are as different as they were ever in past. Cultural identity is far away from wha...
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... Although, citizens copy western culture , they do all the activity related their ...
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Suggestion:
...for business and culture than demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5015015015 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93456705802 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0738594944 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2727272727 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13636363636 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177472249564 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04390359858 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356521386285 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102928584059 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334602094715 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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