In many countries, the cost of living is rising. What problems will this for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of this issue.
In some parts of the world, the living cost is soaring, negatively affecting people to face several problems in their lives. While this tendency predominantly takes its toll on the transport system and housing demands within society, proper solutions should be taken into address.
The rising cost, especially when it comes to transportation, could pose a problem to people’s lives. It means that even though local citizens have a privilege to approach advanced vehicles, they would find it extremely difficult to cover the price. For example, since high-speed trains have first been developed in Vietnam, people unwillingly choose this mean of transports to travel because they barely afford the ticket. Apart from this, the rising cost of accommodation also has an adverse effect on people’s lives. For example, metropolises often attract a great deal of people’s attention to live in, however, this results in the rising cost of houses and apartments because of people’s demands. Therefore, people, especially immigrants, have to live in low-quality residential areas or even slums, which are considered as uncomfortable and inconvenient.
Alongside the negative influence of this tendency expressed above, two main solutions should not be dismissed. First, governments should encourage local citizens to relocate to live in regional areas, where they would find it ideal enough to settle down. The living cost of these places is relatively lower than that of large cities, which greatly benefits people to experience a higher standard of life. Second, companies and industries need to get involved in creating job opportunities because this would facilitate people to find a more decent job. Therefore, they could take advantage of their well-paid salary to cover their bills.
In conclusion, although several problems, arising from the higher cost of living, are proven to have a negative impact on people’s lives, relocation and more job opportunities could be the best option to solve them.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53821656051 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.941304793 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605095541401 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8827455551 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.214285714 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19307490769 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682582013805 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367345063012 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123999462924 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299684907281 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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