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In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

It is true that the increase in the living costs is occurring in many countries. Although there are undoubtedly some negative consequences of this trend, measures can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.

To begin with, rising living costs result in negative effects on both individuals and society. In terms of individuals, it is getting more difficult to pay their living. Workers, especially underprivileged laborers who are still struggling to afford the basic standards of life, will end up getting stuck in poverty in their lifetime if the costs are not suitably adjusted. This leads to a deep impact on the society that the inhabitants will gradually leave their home. Moreover, it makes the “American Dream” become such a common phenomenon.

However, there are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the aforementioned problems. Firstly, a simple solution would be saving. As the civilians cannot interfere with the rising of the costs, the only way that they could help themselves is to cut off unnecessary expense, which has been successfully conducted with Minimalism. Secondly, the authorities should spend their national budgets to decline the products’ costs. For instance, at the end of 2019, the Vietnamese government withdrew a significant amount of money from the national budgets to import tons of pork from Russia so that the rising national pork’s price could decrease.

All in all, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the living costs are continuously increasing. If people in the community take actions together, there will be a bright future for a sufficient life.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89451224595 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6564396286 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19307611138 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605666002363 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780462439412 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105832890508 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451967295929 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments