In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think that new teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your opinion.
Education and health facilities are the basic needs of every individual. These facilities are mostly concentrated in the urban cities. Some people advocate for the newly appointed teachers and medical personnel to serve in the rural setting for early few years while other opine for the independence in choosing the working area by the technical personnel. This essay will shed the lights on behalf of poor rural people for the right to easy access to quality education and health facilities.
Firstly, the easy access to quality education and health facility is the right of every citizen of the nation. Even the officials oath for serving the people in need with no any discrimination in the name of color, religion, place, economic status and many more. Also, the fresher can get a perfect platform experiencing the theoretical knowledge practically along with sharpening their techniques for competing in the profession in a long run.
Most of the education systems in the developed nations are governed by government sectors and it invests a great amount of budget for generating a qualified professional. So, the government should formulate the policy about the compulsory service of the graduates to the rural areas for some specified period. To my personal experience, the government of Nepal posts the newly appointed government officials in the rural places for about 2-3 years before placement in a desired site.
In contrast, such provision can have a demotivating effect on the student towards specific subjects leading to decline in the professionals in future along with lack of commitment and passiveness in the work. Such practice can have a detrimental effect on both the rural people and the service providers. However, the situation can be balanced by some sort of attractive schemes-financial or other additional facilities line bonus, insurances and other benefits, which can inspire the officials to go to rural places.
Overall, the doctors and teachers need to work in line with the national policy serving in rural setting while the government too can manage the additional financial and support facilities for motivating officials to work in country side with much passion and zeal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'officials'' or 'official's'?
Suggestion: officials'; official's
...f every citizen of the nation. Even the officials oath for serving the people in need wit...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ath for serving the people in need with no any discrimination in the name of color...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, as for, in contrast, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30028328612 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90065066597 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529745042493 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1710644666 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.642857143 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225672637836 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742249513441 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620875566219 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122627237653 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583852324012 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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