Nowdays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists instead of locals.Why is this happening?What can be done to get local to visit museums and historical sites more?

Essay topics:

Nowdays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists instead of locals.
Why is this happening?
What can be done to get local to visit museums and historical sites more?

Landmarks and museums, in the present context, are widely popular among the foreigners besides the local residents. Globalization is the main cause while awareness regarding the importance of sites is a most for promoting locally.

World has become a smaller place as a rapid advancement in the technology and access to internet. Peoples nowadays leaves no stones unturned with respect to fulfilling their interest and eagerness. Peoples escape their hectic schedule schedules travelling to same exotic places within or overseas. In addition to that, the historians and anthropologists have now easy access to any desired nook and corner in the world. Thus, museums and historical sites become the part of their excursion, either primary or tertiary, among many other destinations. For example, a recent report by BBC concluded that, on an average 60 percent of every white colored professionals are found in an abroad family trip once in every two month.

Local people needs to be made aware regarding the importance of their history, culture and legacy. Awareness campaign among all age groups, especially focusing on youths and children, can be a major stopgap measure highlighting the relevance of promoting their culture and history through museums. In addition to that, the management and operational aspects of the property could be shared among the locals and authority. This may help generate we-feeling among the locals resulting promotion of institutions locally along with maintaining social integrity and security. To my perspective, handling over the operation and maintenance aspect to the local community could garnish the local visitors significantly.

To sum up, museums and places with historical values are widely popular among the outsiders. Easy access and change in travelling habits are the major driving force, however, awareness campaigns and local management roles can help influence the domestic tourism.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, to sum up, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56756756757 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87456129342 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0230022188 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150546484856 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485835618221 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459455384677 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917760395493 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204890497109 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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