In many countries, governments spend a lot of money on internet infrastructure. Some say it is reasonable to allocate these funds, but others disagree and say that many more important programs need this money. Discuss both views, give your opinion and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, expending extremely good money on the internet infrastructure and information technology (IT) lies at the heart of many governments' strategy to provide citizens with an extensive diversity of facilities online. Although, from my perspective, this practice can assist heavy weightings of nations in making somewhat significant inroads into greater future prosperity, the other programes are of paramount importance to receive this amount of money.
There are some key significant factors behind why such policy can make a moderately valuable contribution to the progression of societies. Firstly, it can offer the inhabitants a fair chance to run their own business not to rely on those of the other companies, while launching them on a path of generating a huge influx of cash. Consequently, the massive impact of this trend will inexorably reflect on the competence of government which prompts them to take a route to use the revenue generated as well as investing funds in economic, education, health care and other infrastructures; nevertheless, individuals' expected high standards of living can considerably be satisfied.
However, if these funds are directly paid for the other systems, it would be a remarkably golden opportunity for them to plan their route to success independently, whereas inducing them to both acknowledge their deficiencies hardly expected and improve their efficiencies. In the education system, for instance, teachers not only [S4]themselves can employ effective methods to motivate students with less intellectual capacities, but also can wield their absolute power to supply pupils with enormously gratis facilities such as well-equipped laboratories to improve in the acquisition of knowledge which undoubtedly encourage students to participate in classes.
In conclusion, it is true that spending money an on the internet infrastructure can exert significant influence on countries' economic growth; however, some portions of investments for such policy have to be given to other organisations to be financially self-reliant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...technology IT lies at the heart of many governments strategy to provide citizens with an ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72727272727 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36257065803 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63961038961 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2430324685 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.5 106.682146367 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.5 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.25 7.06120827912 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131747654034 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575292168506 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448222239138 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861103384239 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574899116057 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.99 50.2224549098 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.21 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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