In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

When it comes to food there are many options to choose from. However majority of the people tend to opt for food that is exported from other areas than buying the food that is processed locally. The imported food attracts its buyers but local food should also be promoted .

With regards to the internationally processed food , there are many reasons why people tend to buy these food items. Firstly the exotic verities available make it clear. For instance the local food might not have that much options where as internationally processed food will definitely have it. Secondly the international food companies invest more in attractive packaging as a result to which it is sold in more numbers as compared to the local food companies.

In order to increase the consumption of locally produced food items , the companies should promote their products on television. Rather than settling with normal packaging , attractive colors should be used which are eye catching. The government should also help in campaigning for product promotion and spread awareness about the local food companies to increase their profit. Consequently the production would increase to some point. Furthermore the companies can set some sort of discounts to attract the consumers.

To conclude , Although the multinational food firms are increasing their profits by expanding the business in other countries , the government should help the local companies in order to increase their consumption.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, for instance, sort of, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40517241379 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84710607344 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2915604035 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8461538462 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412028929141 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150785804965 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126119253892 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257826208293 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168598149054 0.056905535591 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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