One of the most contemporary issues that receive concerns from various parts of the world is an alarming rate of youth unemployment. It is the fact that there is an increasing number of alumnus who are struggling with job seeking these days. In the following paragraphs, the causes and problems would be analyzed with some plausible solutions being suggested.
First and foremost, the large numbers of jobless young adults could be attributed to some factors that should be taken into consideration. A justification is that study curriculum in most academic institutions pay more attention to academic theories rather than to practical knowledge, which may lead to the lack of working experience among new graduates when they take over a particular job position. Another trigger is a common misconception that students who graduate with high qualifications including Bachelor’s or Master’s degree can get a well-paid job for granted, which could be connected to students have a tendency to reject career opportunities that cannot meet their expectations. In addition, overpopulation could be considered to be one of the main culprits which lead to the jobless among the youth.
It is can be undeniable that young people being rendered unemployed could have adverse impacts on society and national economy. To begin with, the high rates of youth unemployment are related to the level of criminals which might have negative far-reaching implications for social safety. Moreover, the youth jobless crisis exerts considerable pressure on social welfare which should have been allocated to improve social conditions such as building nursing houses or developing infrastructures.
In conclusion, to avoid this phenomenon worsening, some reasonable steps should be implemented. First of all, it is high time universities and colleges reconstructed their educational options to balance academic theories and empirical knowledge. Take surgical students as an example. They should be taught how to use surgical instruments proficiently instead of what they are and what they look like. Besides, it is advisable for governments launched a nationwide birth-control policy to put a curb on the number of children in a family. Last but not least, it would be a worthwhile idea if local authorities instituted a job-supporting campaign with the aim of assisting new graduates to search for a job.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44474393531 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19558347806 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595687331536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6727582507 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216328783536 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634840607387 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457243040511 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119309099092 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264100572269 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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