In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
All over the globe, the number of older people is increasing due to the advancement in medical science and low workplace accidents. In my opinion, although this development has increased life expectancy, it will result in more negative impacts on society. This essay will back my opinion while looking at both the pros and cons of this trend.
One of the major advantages of this trend is that it will increase the number of experienced professionals. Since experienced people are proved to be more efficient as compared to their inexperienced counterparts, this trend will result in the better workplace practices consequently more revenue will be generated. For example, mostly human resource agents want at least two years of job experience in relevant field because it will help company to utilize their valuable experience.
On the other hand, there are some serious drawbacks regarding to this drift which should also be considered. Firstly, over population is the biggest concern nowadays due to the severity of this problem. In other words, earth can accommodate only certain number of inhabitants. Therefore, researchers think that if the population growth remain constant then there will be no place for future generations. Secondly, older people require more medical care which is causing extra funds to be invested in medical budget. To illustrate, according to a recent survey, Pakistan in spending over 60 percent of its budget on healthcare departments and the demand will surely increase as result of rise in older people numbers in the future.
In conclusion, it is true that the increase in the number of older people will cause a rise in the proportion of experienced professionals but problems like over population and economy crisis will also accompany it. Therefore, governments should focus more on young generation rather than investing a huge amount on older people because former will be responsible for carrying country in the future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25796178344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87925038195 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3142447377 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173046936183 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653375196153 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423852217705 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118987585823 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252197498688 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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