Nowadays, most of the people choose to live in large cities rather than small towns. There are many reasons for this like the facilities and most
importantantly job oportunities and comparatively higher salary. They prefer to live a better and healthy lifestyle. However, these have some negative
impacts also.In this essay I shall analyse the causes and the solutions to address this problem with the logical conclusion.
To start with the urbanization that had been increasing day by day, the making of illegal infrastructure had been reaching at its greatest height. For
this instance,The trees and forests are depleting in the reason of building infrastructure. Due to this the pure oxygen can not be easily get and
breathing problems can be arise because of that. In view of the fact of densely populated urban areas the traffic problems had also been expanding.
The disposal system has also become a problem these days. For this illustration, people are throwing their waste disposal in the water or anywhere on
the roads, due to which the water pollution and land pollution occurs. The water becomes contaminated and gives birth to many dangerous diseases
like typhoid, malaria and many others. The another example to this is the high living costs.
There are many solutions to the above mentioned problems. First of all, the government should make plans to equalised both urban and rural areas.
The steps should taken to build parks and gardens at some distances. For this illustration, The cabinet officers should give more facililities to the people
of countryside as well. They should make them sure that they live in farmland only and do not settle in metropolitan cities. They should provide more
job opportunities and better infrastructure facilities. The another step regarding this would be that the organisation should reduce the prices of living
expenses for everyone to afford it.
To summarize, with reference to everything discussed above, the high population pressure and poor planning are the major reasons which have
impacted the quality of life in major metropolitan cities. However, this can be diminished certainly by taking proper measures and active planning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, so, well, first of all, to start with, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79937248539 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0506386753 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0476190476 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208240415908 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558054479442 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504854386455 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634092064638 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056561270041 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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