In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society?
In the world of today, it is irrefutable that respect of older people is decline due to some reasons. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this worrying trend.
To embark on, there are many reasons for lack of respect toward adult people. First and foremost, parents are become more workaholic so that it is important reason of this phenomenon because they do have enough time to spent with their child and therefore the children are not aware of knowledge about respect. In addition to this, education system is not enough capable to get concentrate on child and give important advice to how to respect old people. For a real-life example, these days institute focus on curriculum and run for grade for this reason, children do not identify outside knowledge. Moreover, older person belongs to old generation so that people of new generation also think they do not have knowledge about how to live in present day, so they do not believe in to get advice from older people.
There are several issues which bring due to lack of respect in countries. To embark on, the government face some problem of insufficient experience because older people have lot of experience to how to tackle trouble of economy. To illustrate, the government should get help from older people in some problem that is why, in administration some old people have remain these days.
In conclusion, it is our duty to respect older people and include in our family decision. However, this situation leads huge problem in counties so that we can respect old people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... in administration some old people have remain these days. In conclusion, it is our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90036900369 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57104760898 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512915129151 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2208035286 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300780075874 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112856926641 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038735903855 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182015794194 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463207369412 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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