In many countries, young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?
Nowadays there is a tendency that youngster in many nations takes turns leaving their serenity hometown to megacities with the aim of working or studying. This result from several causes and neither benefits nor drawbacks should be underestimated
To begin with, there is a variety of explanations for the migration of the young. First and foremost, the major of prestigious universities or enterprises are located in big cities. It is irrefutable that there hardly any notable college situated in rural areas. This inadequate distribution encouraged numerous young people to move into megacities for the purpose of learning from well-known teachers along with cutting edge facilities. Another reason is due to the characteristic of rural occupation as seasonal and low paying jobs. Therefore, these ambitious youngsters leave their family in hometown and seeking for a high salary job in prosperous capitals
The migrant of youngsters into big cities may bring many advantages. In the first place, it may provide them with an opportunity to change their life. As they have a chance to approach with in-depth knowledge that rarely taught in local institutions, these rural youngmen are more likely to earn a stable living after graduating from the university since the career choice in urban areas is more extensive than in rural ones. Consequently, it increases their income as well as improves their living standards.
Regarding the adverse impacts of urban migration, it worth pointing out the higher rate of unemployment. It seems to be shreds of evidence that a great number of migrants cannot apply for a job based on the fact they lack several practical skills as well as experiences. Furthermore, the daily expenses in urban regions are much expensive than in the countryside, hence, many youngster are struggling with financial difficulties or serious debts.
To summarize, the wave of migrants is caused by the feature of rural occupation as low paying and seasonal job, as well as the inadequate distribution of universities and workplaces. On the one hand, it may benefit the youngster with stable income and a range of work choice. On the other hand, it may shrink the young migrants into financial challenges and serious debts as a result of expensive living expenses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22888283379 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93260426822 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550408719346 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8085797362 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9375 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119118392427 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361522449742 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296680825205 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660250121515 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356648803202 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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