Nowdays, crime committed by criminals after being released from jails is burgeoning day by day. This situation has become a serious problem in every nation. There are many reasons why such criminals released after their conviction period commit these crimes. In the upcoming paragraph I will elaborate the causes and how this problem can be solved.
Embarking upon there a plethora reasons why the activity of offence is done by the convicted person again after release from prison. First and foremost, most offenders do an illegal activity first time as they somehow want to earn money. But when these people are putted into lockup by police and released after sometime they are in the same situation as before conviction. Before they were unemployed and after they also have no source of income. As an evidence, a recent survey has shown that 90 out of 100 offenders are from poor background and have no source of income. So to fill their pockets with money criminals again do some offensive activity. In addition this, peer group also has some effect on minds of criminals. While offenders are in prisons they are around people who themselves have done some illegal activity. Therefore, when these people meet they share their thoughts and motivates each other to commit crime again.
Moving further, there are many ways in which this problem can be solved. The prisoners should be counselled by officers and they should be given mental counselling. For instance, most of the criminals suffer from stress and this mental problem mostly leads to occurring of offensive activity again by offenders. Further, the criminals after being released from detention center should be provided with posts in various employment institutions like factories.
To conclude, due unemployment criminals commit crime after being released from guardhouse and peer group also plays a role in this. However, to solve this problem convicted person should be provided with jobs and proper counselling by authorities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 658, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ls again do some offensive activity. In addition this, peer group also has some effect o...
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Line 2, column 728, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... has some effect on minds of criminals. While offenders are in prisons they are aroun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19504643963 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52641443382 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.788399548 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3157894737 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192363836024 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664251177026 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419194407628 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131894448985 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330814098024 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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