In today's world most of the prisons are getting fully accommodated by prisoners who have a poor background. Some people have a thought lack of income sources is the reason behind most offences. I accord with the notion and in the upcoming paragraph I will elaborate two reasons to support my viewpoint.
First and foremost, most of the people who are poor do not possess neither assets nor a source of income. These people cannot even afford necessities like food and shelter. For instance, a survey report has shown that 56 percent of populace in a nation cannot buy food to feed themselves. So, to buy the food items they get engaged in crime like drug dealing and sexual rackets. In these activities a surplus amount of money can be earned so poor people get involved in these offences easily.
Secondly, most of the people of poor community are drunkards and drug addicted. This addiction become so severe that an addicted person spends all his money on buying the products to fulfill the addiction. As an evidence, a packet of marijuana cost about ten thousand dollars and cannot be afforded by poor. The addict starts thinking that optimum state of well being is received only by taking injections of drugs. So, to buy these products addicts start doing crimes like kidnapping a child and
in such crimes they demand a high amount of money.
To conclude, Most criminals do a barred activity so they can eradicate their poverty and fulfill their demands like food. A crime is also performed by drug addicts to somehow buy the drugs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ort my viewpoint. First and foremost, most of people who are poor do not possess neither ass...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...income. These people cannot even afford basic necessities like food and shelter. For instance, a ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d. This addiction become so severe that a addicted person spends all his money o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... This addiction become so severe that a addicted person spends all his money on ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...doing crimes like kidnapping a child and in such crimes they demand a high amount...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77902621723 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46942901247 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8639574026 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169736334992 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594828648582 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734067449019 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866056541069 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598903446186 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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