Many government thinks that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, economy growth is playing a crucial role in the development of regions but also other factors such as health, education and etcetera are also necessary for country’s progress. A section of society deems that their most effective aim is rise in economy because others neglect these and says that others factors are equal and not economic for the growth of nations. This easy will shed light on both views along with my perception.
One school of thought believes that economic cause is very essential for the progress of country’s economy because if a region will be rich by their economy than they can easily solve the obstacles like unemployment, poverty and so on among their natives. In addition to this, a wealthy countries can give a lot of facilities to citizens and able to full fill their needs. Even though, a nation which is economically developed can expand a vast amount of money to enhance the conditions of health centres, education centres and many more. Furthermore, if a country with good economy conditions than they are always ready to fight with the hurdles about to tries to harm their country as well as citizens . For example, The USA has very rich in their economy and they give so many facilities to their natives and a big wall among country’s citizens and enemies.
The another school of thought said that only economic growth is not crucial for nation’s development there are another factors which is always important for region’s progress and the main is education as an education is essential for the rising of country so a region’s citizens have well-educated than their nations will be growing. Moreover, if a nation is rich within economy but poor in education than the progress of regions will be declined. Apart from this, the second major reason is health. It is common said that health is wealth and if a citizens of country will healthy than nations will automatically healthy. In other words, if nations are natives suffering from various types of ailments and regime never given their focus on them but also give priority to economic progress than it will be perilous for region’s growth. Last but not least, a healthy man can pay lots of efforts in the rising of nation. For instance, China is developing nation which natives are physical fit as well educated and they are offering huge amount of hard work in the development of region.
In my prospective, economic and other factors are equal and their have equal importance because they all necessary for the growth of nations. Beside that, if a region will negligible any reason than it will halt the progress of countries.
In conclusion, although economic progress is most effective aim for many authorities but other factors are also essential as they give huge numbers of efforts in the rising of regions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: country
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: a citizen; citizens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2393.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00627615063 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74017079094 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433054393305 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 749.7 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9091120714 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.944444444 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204521028501 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757805444377 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613982203088 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151494051856 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326114076939 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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