People hold different definitions of goals of a country. While some governments put the economic progress as the first priority, i assume that there are other kinds of progress of the equal importance.
There is no doubt that economic success provides fundamental and essential basis for a coutry`s development. With sufficient investment, the authorities are not only capable to establish infrastructure such as highways, fast trains, and urban and rural transportation systems, but also able to guarantee people`s education, academic or vocational. This can be illustrated by the advanced subway system in many cities in china, as well as the free education for children from elementary school to middle school.
However, the goals of a country ought to be consisted of more aspects than just developing its economy. Firstly, the presmium standards of life can not be guaranteed without a friendly environment, considering that there are expamples in many countries that natural environment has been sacrificed to achieve economy increase. Secondly, the level of health and food safety should play significant roles in the governments` plans. Simply emphasis on economy might lead to overlooking of doing exercise and regular meals. Those who can not ensure 3 meals a today because of endless work need to be taken into consideration by the government.
Moreover, it is also an important symbol of civilization improvement for a country to give enough respect to the ethnic and social minorities.
In conclusion, besides progress in economy, a government should also pursue other types of progress like clean environment, public health, social equality and so on.
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...ypes of progress like clean environment, public health, social equality and so on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49808429119 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19134779569 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685823754789 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3076234318 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247610846837 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750690734585 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864270731078 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140746820152 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102197001112 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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