Throughout practically all stages of a country's growth, economy always plays a crucial role among essential fields. Some individuals argue that, the growth of other specialties are as equal as the economic rise. In my point of view, I believe that the contribution of economy is the primary aim of any governments.
Firstly, as we can see that, domestic majors all need financial support. Thus, governments concentrate noticeably to grow up the economy to make an essential fund for supporting other fields.Government is having a lot of things need financial resource. We witnessed throughout the COVID pandemic, disrupting their work, missing conditions get income and other problems happened. In addition, although in peaceful term but we also have to manufacture or buy weapons from other areas to prevent the civil if it suddenly occurs. Another red-flat problem is about the pollution of environment, they almost need the financial development to address these issues.
Secondly, our country will become stronger and reach out to the world. When people are in a wealthy country, they will have many ideal living conditions to live with high quality, besides that, making opportunity to approach the widen knowledge are around the world. Since, making geniuses to nurture where they was born in as well as in the world.
To sum up, with many givens, I see that economic development plays the most essential role than others. Of course, other specialties are also no less important in the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, of course, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18518518519 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85935094418 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646090534979 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5538891276 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138425324034 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453916268255 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371896918297 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809801331896 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325859380675 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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